mirror

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Other

    mirror

    Only you when I look in the mirror
    Your mistakes your trouble all I can see
    The only me I see is a picture
    Will they ever look be on and se me
    Look at what you left for me to clean
    Even so I never came to dislike
    How did this become you are your own friend
    I win you and I am not a like
    But some how you shadow follows me back
    How did that title ever get my name?
    Can I improve what in god’s name I lack?
    The one who gave me life and when away
    You who sits and wait to be free one day.

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    trets commented on mirror

    06-30-2009

    kinda confusing, but i got it after i thought baout it and re read it a couple of times. you should hit the enter button after every break where your saying one line and then continue on it would make it easier to read. if i even made sense lol

    baddollyr2

    06/30/2009

    you know what i didn't even edit this one

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    baddollyr2’s Poems (17)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Chained by Emotions 0
    The Doll Factory 0
    Black bird 0
    The Girl in the Glasses 0
    your pain 0
    who am i 0
    untitle 0
    pet 0
    i woke up 0
    playground 2
    my grave of water 1
    black water 1
    mirror 1
    Barriers 0
    little mis 2
    dear whoever 2
    two face 2