Pile

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    Pile

    The day, ever slowly drips by,
    As hints of much darker clouds,
    Start to congregate, in the already dull grey,
    Miserable abyss that looms, lowly, just over our heads.
    Constatly, it is watching us,
    Waiting, so patiently, for even the thought of the faintest hint,
    Of a smile on your face, then she will...
    Well, the Demonic Hell-bourne Sucubus mother will rain,
    Rain right down on our parade, washing it away.
    Down, down the drain, as mere sewer waste,
    Now we all moosh together, all mixed up,
    Just one big juicy steaming pile.
    Wet shit, waiting for our own blowfly,
    All clumped together on this retched flying rock,
    Fertilizing the soil, so the next pile will grow.

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    photochick commented on Pile

    08-24-2009

    You diffidently have talent thats for sure your way with words is that of beauty you have an act for giving the readers grand imagery wonderful job once again funny thats for sure a 10 for sure thanks for sharing and for the laugh

    ofonime commented on Pile

    08-24-2009

    hmmmmmm yummyy........ i love this. You are very good in your tone and words. i love this

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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