My Rose

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    I wrote this for my girlfriend for the day i got out of jail.

    My Rose

     I've waited way to long now,
    To touch the sweet smile on your face,
    And I want you to know from my heart,
    That heaven itself couldn't take your place.

    Now you sit beautifully before me,
    And you take all my breathe away,
    I have tossed and turned, every single night,
    Waiting for this wonderful day.

    You are my Rose, my shining star,
    My personal silver lining,
    And I would travel, no matter how far,
    Just to see your baby blues shining.

    So kiss me now my Angel,
    I came back as soon as I could.
    And now I will be here for you,
    Like a real Man should.

                                                     
                                                       

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    sammia commented on My Rose

    08-18-2009

    You can feel the love you have for your girlfriend as the words flow out and how the emotions shine through this piece. Great write and keep writing and sharing
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    1990lh commented on My Rose

    08-15-2009

    wow again great poem i love it i could just hear the love in our voice
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    photochick commented on My Rose

    08-14-2009

    Very passionate poem you can tell you really love this girl nice flow as well I enjoyed it alot and cant wait to read more of your work
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    cliftondurant commented on My Rose

    08-14-2009

    beautiful love poem it's great to be in love with the girl of your dreams great poem
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    Nadia1986 commented on My Rose

    08-14-2009

    So sweet how much you love a women the poem really says it all.
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