Oatmeal Pinata

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Oatmeal Pinata

If we all lived in an oatmeal pinata,
Shaped like the mix between a giraffe's torso,
And the left of an upside down hole in the sky,
Parked ever so curiously, down by the lake,
Then no one would really even have a clue,
About what the hell was going on at all.

So this is why I warn all smart mothers,
Don't let your children write poetry,
It makes our mindless imaginations think of stuff.
That, well... would have been just as well,
Simply unthought.      


                                                                BTR

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dumplin commented on Oatmeal Pinata

08-24-2009

wow, wonder of the oatmeal is cooked or uncooked. LOL

AmadeusEx commented on Oatmeal Pinata

08-23-2009

have had this thought before...youre poetry is very whimsical in way that i have never attempted at...but i like it

stnirptoof

08/23/2009

glad you enjoyed it, have a lot of mindless ramblings. Keep reading!!!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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