PEN

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    If I can't speak I think writing should be my way of expressing my feelings.The fact is that I feel relieved anytime I write a poem,to show that those words are heavy to be left in my head.

    PEN



    Writing is my way
    Of fighting back
    I may be physically powerless
    Not mentally otherwise
    I allow my hand
    To work for me
    Pulling my weapon along
    To express my bottomless mind
    Since mute is not my coz'
    I need this rope
    To draw out
    All the obedient follows
    That fell into this dark water
    I have come to rescue you
    Trust my feminine strength
    Hold on to my hand
    And make not your look shallow
    But force your lens to part
    For peace to reign.

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    spbsdude commented on PEN

    10-15-2009

    Writing can be so therapuetic and heal wounds. I write to be heard, but I also write to get what's inside out on the page so I can heal from life's wounds inflicted on me by myself and others who do not always have my interests at hand. In a way it is also my way of fighting back. Very nice poem.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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