Native

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    She is really a beautiful creature,don't you think so?

    Native

    Under the sun, she is a shadow
    In front of a mirrow an image
    Some see her as a water goddess
    others as a sun goddess
    Her nose is standing
    pointing down towards
    The valley of her upper jaw
    And her eyes like that
    Of an Eagle
    With succulent lips
    That never get dried
    Her shoulder as broad
    As the red sea
    Her legs are that
    Of a water gull
    Long hair which presents
    Her as a mermaid
    On her bossom, stands
    Two mountains,facing each other,
    Her body posses the colour
    That makes her proud
    She looks Africa

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    mdpoetgirl commented on Native

    08-14-2009

    I love the imagery of this poem... another great reflection on the beauty Africans and blacks possess. Nicely done.

    WordSlinger commented on Native

    08-14-2009

    This is beautiful, you created a great poem of womanhood, enjoy that, for sure..

    Charity

    08/14/2009

    Thanks dear

    hoth2o commented on Native

    08-07-2009

    I really liked this poem, very descriptive. My only suggestion is to spell check before you post.

    Charity

    08/12/2009

    Thanks about the advice,I was really checking out for that,I couldn't do anything when I saw the error,beside I was in a hurry not to miss class that day.thanks alot.

    carmentis commented on Native

    07-27-2009

    outstanding and bold a remarkable peice of peotry, she look africa , sweet words sweet image native and true native and rooted

    Charity

    07/27/2009

    thanks about that,it's really encouraging.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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