Life

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    The fact about life is that it's like a ticking clock,nobody wants his clock to stop ticking because it stops,you know.

    Life

     Tick, Tick the clock
    Singing the welcome song
    Time too short
    To predict what comes
    Only the Mighty man knows
    What Who When and how
    The earth begs "Olisa"
    To allow the clock
    To contiune ticking
    As lf they know
    When it started
    They are afraid
    To hear it stop
    Only "Olisa" the Mighty one
    Can pause or stop
    This mysterious clock

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    spbsdude commented on Life

    10-15-2009

    Time is precious, and how we use our time is very important. Too many waste their time on frivious pursuits. We need to treat it as the treasure it is. Nice job.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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