Passion

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    Passion

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    I've awakened from a dream.
    I turn around and see your face.
    Candles burn.
    I rub my eyes,
    and go to put on makeup.
    We kissed and you drank me up.
    You enveloped me with you.
    I was you.
    What day is it?
    The calendar says Monday.
    Damn! I have a pimple!
    The wind blows fiercely.
    I have to hold on.
    you begin to awaken
    with dazzled eyes.
    you look at me with a smile.
    You know.
    Chains trap my body.
    to the bed.
    I want to go!
    Let me go!
    I smile softly and kiss your face.
    I hate you!
    "What do you want for breakfast?"
    "You."
    the window shatters.
    Red curtains blow in t3eh wind.
    i hear a wild scream.
    ""No! No! Yes! More!"
    you grab me and kiss my neck,
    down to my vein - my soul.
    You kiss my lips gently.
    red lights are glaring.
    Mouths. Tongues. Fire.
    I get up, leave,
    and slam the door.

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    anniebloom commented on Passion

    04-21-2009

    awwww sweet

    Grito commented on Passion

    04-17-2009

    An excellent breakfast. 10

    dahlusion commented on Passion

    01-08-2009

    Well written, but I am missing how it's erotic. Seems more sensual than erotic

    rollerderby commented on Passion

    01-03-2009

    Well done dear, you build me up just to close the do before the fire really gets going. I really liked the way you played with different scenarios. It kept my attention. Doug

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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