Pass the Time

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    Pass the Time

    My mind is very unstable right now
    My life is unstable at this point in time,
    At times I feel as if my life isn't mine to do with as I please,
    always like a puppet on a string, uncontrolled actions
    through no will of my own.

    Profile of a man whose soul is torn, threadbare,and worn,
    going nowhere in life broken, and weak; alas my spirit
    unstable, and meek.

    No longer able to deal with life's stresses, at times making
    me pull at my tresses, underappreciated, slightly disrespected.

    Live life to the fullest is the motto I live by, unstable as it may seem at least it's still mine.

    Even if it isn't it's the way I pass the time.

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    MagicRock commented on Pass the Time

    03-04-2009

    Nice. Very nice.

    candysears commented on Pass the Time

    02-26-2009

    Excellent write..Blessings always

    EvilEyes commented on Pass the Time

    02-17-2009

    I feel ya man from the heart. Keep up the excellent work.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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