Pain!

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    Pain!
    So easy it seems
    To let go of someone you know
    So hard is this feeling to be told
    Waited and waited for them to get back
    But they were too busy
    to acknowledge the tears that I had
    They easily seemed to let me go
    Breaking the promises so easily made before
    Many chances I gave to them
    But they took less care of it
    How easily they moved ahead
    from the problems that I had!
    Heart is broken to a thousand pieces
    This wrekage will last for long
    As I take this journey
    Past memories flush around
    So happy and content I was
    But I guess I forgot God!
    This is my fate now
    Living far from the person I
    Love the most!

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    SusanLee commented on Pain!

    04-16-2009

    Yes and yes again.
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    Nousheen

    06/25/2009

    Thank you.

    mythai commented on Pain!

    02-25-2009

    I like this one... I can relate
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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