Ashes of Hope

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    Ashes of Hope

    Hopes being tarnished
    Dreams being thrashed
    Esteem being lost
    Pride is there no more

    Things change suddenly
    Tears shed endlessly
    Hurt's so deeply
    Broken up to the highest degree

    Sun brings no change
    Moon seems so gloomy
    Each day remains the same
    Look everywhere for change

    Things remain the same
    Mind too occupied lost somewhere
    Hurt so much, tears seemed to have dried away
    Why do I find no way?

    Dunes of sand I see everywhere
    No hope for rain, only despair
    Such is the agony
    If you listen with open ears

    Feelings can’t be told
    My fears can’t be sold
    They lie deep inside me
    Burning every inch of me

    Why do I feel sad?
    When everything seems all right
    No one will ever know
    What lies within my eyes.

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    Rainz commented on Ashes of Hope

    03-19-2009

    Wow... all I can say is that I thought I alone knew these feelings. Apparently not! Your work amazes me. Feel free to read mine. I'd love to hear your thoughts.

    Nousheen

    06/25/2009

    Thank you so much. I am glad you like my work.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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