Our Love Is Grand

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Our Love Is Grand

 

I just can't figure it out

How you can talk to my heart

Without making a sound

I know with you

That I just cant lose

Everytime I look into your eyes

That is where my serenity lies

I've finally found my peace of mind

My horrora and dramas were left behind

I've never believed

In love at first sight

Until that one blissful night

I looked into your eyes

I've never believed

In fairy tales and happy everafter

Baby though when we're together

I feel so high almost touching the sky

My final chapter

In this long love story

Has finally been put together

With you I'll never be sorry

When you hold me in your arms

My body melts into you

Baby my heart feels safe from harm

When our lips caress each others

It takes my breath away

And when our eyes meet

My heart truly skips a beat

A love like ours is pure as gold

Fresh as the driven snow

Baby,what I am saying is....

Our love is grand.

~Shawna Cramer Pate~2009

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lithiumblack commented on Our Love Is Grand

09-27-2009

I think most men, though they'd never admit to it, would love to be the subject of such a poem. I truly look forward to reading more of your work. You're quickly becoming one of my all time favorite poets. And yes, I mean that with all sincerity. Another...wait for it...a 10!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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