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  • Lost Love

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    Fast and furious, one week it took
    Should have denied myself that second look
    But now I know what all it takes
    To rid your mind of the mistakes
    And now, with what you've asked me to do
    I know that I meant shit to you
    A long hello, a quick goodbye,
    Left without water to wither and die.

    The CD skips on #3
    How sad and ironic this seems to be
    F@$! it, don't fight it, just break it in two
    Now that I know what it meant to you

    The blood in my fingers is driving the pen
    Pouring out feelings kept so deep within
    Nothing but melodies run through my head
    The music still soothing, but the words are dead.

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    DeeVoelkel commented on Open

    07-29-2009

    Excellent! I feel really passion and anger in your lines! Most poems with this kind of anger are better with no rhymes, but you made it work! I am really impressed!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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