on my knees

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    on my knees

     

     

     ON MY KNEES                         

                               CASSIUS MCPHERSON        

     

    I’ve been in this position many times before and I wasn’t looking for keys.

    I was down on the floor wishing I had some more, I was searching down in my knees.

    The embarrassment never crossed my mind on how stupid I really looked.

    But when I finally realized what I was doing I knew then I was hooked.

     

    I couldn’t cry out to anyone no matter how hard I tried.

    I couldn’t face reality would I become a fatally of my own selfish pride.

    My hands began to look like sandpaper because I wiped them across the floor.

    There was nothing there but I didn’t care all I know is I needed some more.

     

    By this time I knew life was unmanageable so I looked up toward the skies.

    I got down on my knees please take this disease oh father hear my cries.

    Then this calm and cool feeling came over me my whole body felt at ease.

    I put my hands together I felt as light as a feather and for the right reasons             I was down on my knees.

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    RebeccaKempf33 commented on on my knees

    09-25-2009

    Nice piece, heartfelt and from the soul. As one person said makes me feel like I am there with you. I can totally relate.

    dahlusion commented on on my knees

    08-12-2009

    This is hard-core poetry in all of its perfection. Really sucks the reader in all the way to the end, placing us down on our knees with you, praying for the universal womb to rebirth us.

    scrye commented on on my knees

    08-08-2009

    Absolutly beautiful poem, true artistry. I applaud you this is very well written, the rhyming was on. BEAUTIFUL and a 10 from me.

    cassius

    08/08/2009

    thanks scrye your a writer nuf said,,,

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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