Ode to Lance

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    Ode to Lance

    One more year has gone by without you
    Two groups of five slashes, plus two times two
    Marked notches on the wall
    Equal the years without your call
    You visit me in dreams
    So alive it seems
    But when I awake
    It all seems so fake,
    As memories fade into the night
    I watch as you pass through the light
    It is the visions of you by my side
    The reasons I have cried
    Since you passed on
    Like something gone terribly wrong
    A good friend who is missing
    Has left me wishing
    For times since gone
    I am left to be strong
    One more year has gone by without you

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    mithus commented on Ode to Lance

    12-02-2008

    Holy squawkers you loved this man. wow and wow....I absolutely love the way you so eiquintly form your words around your thoughts..... Well Done!!!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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