Ocean

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    Ocean

    I am sitting on soft,
     warm,
     sand at a beach near the ocean.

    Wind whippng my long,
     soft,
     brown hair.

    It carries the wonderful smell of the ocean salt.

    My eyes are closed.

    I can feel the wind,
    and the mist from the ocean.

    I hear the waves washing up on the shore,
    and the seagulls flying overhead.

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    HeavensGuardian commented on Ocean

    09-14-2009

    This is a simple potrate of a nice day on the beach, and though you could have endulged into it a lot more than you did, you left it open to allow the reader to make an ending for such a beautiful day at the beach, nicely done.
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    Kyranna

    09/14/2009

    thank-you =3

    Xenia commented on Ocean

    08-16-2009

    I really like this one. :3 It's prettiful. lolz. ILY
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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