Dancing in the Rain

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    Dancing in the Rain

    Gentle,
    wet,
    rain pouring down from the sky.

    The calming,
    soft sound of it landing on the path,
    and grass.

    The feel of the wetness pouring down on my soft skin,
    as i dance in the rain at the park.

    Trees,
    grass,
    flowers,
    bushes,
    and benches,
    all surrounding the path on which i dance.

    I am dancing in the rain.

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    DeepEclipse commented on Dancing in the Rain

    09-15-2009

    Good to see another that's not afraid to embrace the rain. I write about it alot in poetry. Hard to explain why. Just the feeling it gives.

    Kyranna

    09/15/2009

    yeah, i love the rain. it makes me feel..well i cant explain but its nice.

    Xenia commented on Dancing in the Rain

    08-16-2009

    =D It's nice. Blahhh this thing says I need to enter at least 50 characters. lolz I'm done. :P

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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