A Final Choice

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    A Final Choice
    You need to make a final choice.
    We may not have known it from the start,
    But now we found each other's hearts.
    I cannot wait forever,
    I will have to move on.
    You're my shining star,
    Your eyes shine in the light and dark,
    You’re truly an amazing person,
    You just need to look deep within,
    I see who you are inside,
    And I don’t care that you are short,
    Cause everything about you is perfect,
    All you have to do,
    Is make a final choice…

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    chadallac74 commented on A Final Choice

    02-28-2009

    Well written. I was surprised at the line, ".......you're short." I laughed a little... did I say little, I laughed!!!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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