Newly Gone

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  • Death

    Newly Gone

    I found you all alone, deep in a mystery of pain and jumbled thoughts.
    I wished you back 49 years of never to be.
    I said to you, I have missed you so, you held me close and chose to go.
    My heart beats.
    I wish yours could too.

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    copergirl commented on Newly Gone

    01-18-2009

    So, so very good.

    Annabear commented on Newly Gone

    11-14-2008

    This poem is full of deep emotion witch is what poetry is all about I LOVE IT!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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