MY WORDS TO "HIM" WHEN HE'S GONE

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    • tonay
    • BEEN AWAY FOR AWHILE TRYNNA LIVE....IN NEED OF NEW EXPERIENCE

    MY WORDS TO "HIM" WHEN HE'S GONE
    BEEN MISSIN U, SO MUCH LATELY DON'T KNOW WHERE WE END AND I BEGIN; BEEN MISSIN U, SO MUCH LATELY, DON'T KNOW WHERE MY LIFE STARTS AND CAN'T WAIT FOR OURS TO BEGIN
    READY TO TEAR DOWN THE WALL BETWEEN US SO BAD I CAN HIT IT WITH MY BARE HANDS; BUT THIS ROAD IS INVISIBLE DRAWN BY MILES, SO LONG, BUMPY, YET DREARY
    BEEN BLOCKED BY TIME AND FATE BUT DRAWN NEARER BY DREAMS, DREAMS SO REAL I CAN LITERALLY TASTE U, FEEL U, WANT U MORE
    EVERYDAY I'M WITH U,WHEN I'M WITH U, IS SO AMAZING, SO REAL, I CAN'T IMAGINE THIS WORLD, MY WORLD, RIGHT NOW WITHOUT U

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    ccslim commented on MY WORDS TO "HIM" WHEN HE'S GONE

    03-08-2009

    wOOt! Da pwr of Love!!! I sensed the desire through your words! Great job!
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    painz commented on MY WORDS TO "HIM" WHEN HE'S GONE

    03-04-2009

    inspiring words from a good heart :-) u loved this poem
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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