THE GREAT LOVE OF MY LIFE

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  • tonay
  • BEEN AWAY FOR AWHILE TRYNNA LIVE....IN NEED OF NEW EXPERIENCE

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THE GREAT LOVE OF MY LIFE

when he smiles, he lights up my day
when he speaks, i hang on to every word
when he touches me, i shudder because i've never known a touch so tender
my life is now in one complete circle made whole by your love; i want to share everything with you
my heart is now growing made full by your love; every beat grows stronger when u near me
my soul has found its mate; we are as one and will always be
i found the light at the end of the tunnel; the hidden treasure on an old map; and he has the key to this lonely, wierd but warm heart
i hope we spend everyday day together...
at least until i find another one

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redbloodink commented on THE GREAT LOVE OF MY LIFE

12-03-2009

good write.... I found this in Jesus... I hope one day I get blessed with a lady to share it with... Best of wishes.... Red

tonay

01/07/2010

thanks, for ur positive feedback

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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