I SURVIVED IT

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    • Poetry tells stories n a way that i have never seen before and can open u up emotionally and speaks volumes, unheard volumes

    I SURVIVED IT

     I SEE TEARS DRIP FROM SCARS AND PAIN AS RAIN FALLS
    FROM THE SKY, AT TIMES LIFE IS UNFAIR SEEMS LIKE NO ONE
    CARES, WILL IT GET BETTER, SO MANY NIGHTS OF STORMY WEATHER
    I ENDURED FEELN LOST AT SEA SCREAMN FOR SOMEBODY TO BELIEVE 
    IN ME, MOMENTS OF ANGUISH FACE TO FACE WITH THE MAN IN THE MIRROR, AS ISSUES OF CHILD SUPPORT KEEP ME IN COURT WITH LACK OF MONEY AINT GOT NO HONEY, BUT THINGS TO ME DON'T SEEM FUNNY.       
         

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    cmlestrade commented on I SURVIVED IT

    09-10-2009

    Oh well none of us have any money but we create those children and God wants us to take care of them. Good luck on that. I heard a very interesting conversation as to why a man beat his wife. i was furious but I tried to see it from the man's point of view. Please check this poem out and tell me what you think. your poem was good filled with pain and emotion. i will pray that things get better for you.
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    zealous123

    09/10/2009

    thanx for ur comment, really workn hard more to come, thanx for honesty

    Vonn commented on I SURVIVED IT

    09-04-2009

    its noy uncommon to feel alone and down the key is to get up again. i love ur poem and i look forward to readin more from u and would appreciate if u did the same
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    zealous123

    09/05/2009

    thanx 1 time for the realness, life has been tough for me but im still pushin mo to come keep ur ear open to my volume bought to turn it up.

    sincere commented on I SURVIVED IT

    08-27-2009

    Everyone feels like this one time or another. You should add more to this, I was anxious to read more.
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    zealous123

    08/27/2009

    sorry i will i jus came up with that freestyle but jus let go i will come up with somethn else similar okay thanx for the honesty....

    TheInspiration commented on I SURVIVED IT

    08-07-2009

    i like ur poems very much... kinda on the same vibe i'm on... i appreciate ur comment about mine... i will put more up 4 ur viewing pleasure... maybe we could do something 2gether on ur cd... i have written sum songs 2... off to wrk, we'll chat later... thnks again 4 ur feedback....
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    zealous123

    08/11/2009

    thanx for the feed back, im going in the studio in 2 dazes, to record couple of mre songs for my cd, im going to put a 1 poem on my cd my friend . can i get your info my email is tucctightm@yahoo.com (760)662-3731 text me sometime love for you to be on my project

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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