Jus A Peek

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  • zealous123
  • Poetry tells stories n a way that i have never seen before and can open u up emotionally and speaks volumes, unheard volumes

Jus A Peek

I'M ADDICTED TO THE WEB, I FIEN JUS
TO TAKE A SLIGHT PEEK, BUT NOW IT'S
BEEN OVER 24 WEEKS, AS IT BEGINS TO
LEAK THROUGH MY POURES LIKE ITCHING
SORES DEEP DOWN TO MY CORE WHAT 
I THOUGHT WOULD BE A QUICK LOOK 
TURNED INTO DARK SECRETS 
OF A BOOK A DIFFERENT PAGE
THEN I WAS HOOKED LIKE A CRACK 
ADDICT I WAS UNDER HEAVY ATTACK
MY THOUGHTS MY MIND, AMBUSHED
AS MY VIEW BECAME MISCONTREWED
OVER THESE INTERNET GIRLS AS I
WATCHED THEM TOUCH THEIR SELF,
AS GROWN MEN PAY FOR A PRIVATE
DANCE OR TO SEE HER PLASTIC DILDO'S
INSERTED IN BETWEEN HER KEY HOLE NOW
I WONDER WHY WOMEN AND MEN
HAVE LOW SELF ESTEEM HIDING BEHIND
 A LIVE CAMERA IN THE PRIVACY OF THERE 
OWN HOME WANTING SO MUCH 
ATTENTION LIKE A NEWBORN BABY 
HAVING A HISSY FIT, BUT SCARED TO ADMIT
I'M IN A DARK PIT.  



WRITTEN BY ZEALOUS TALK PUBLISHING

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citimagnolia commented on Jus A Peek

09-20-2009

I think this is TRULY relatable. We all have that naughty side, that makes us want to take a peek.....but most are scared to admit it.... I ain't never scared!!......."why u gotta lie craig, why u gotta lie" hahahaha!!

zealous123

09/21/2009

thanx for the love appreciate that, more to come

cmlestrade commented on Jus A Peek

08-28-2009

Addictions come in all forms. Good write but mispelling distracted from the over all piece.

zealous123

08/28/2009

THANX FOR UR COMMENT , I MENT TO SPELL THAT WORD LIKE THAT, THANX FOR UR HONESTY

CasimirJash commented on Jus A Peek

08-28-2009

I'm not addicted to the net (its boring) but I am glad I found this site, but I am addicted to MUSIC. lol nice poem

zealous123

08/28/2009

THANX FOR YOUR COMMENT, REALLY LOL

photochick commented on Jus A Peek

08-27-2009

O i enjoyed this one a lot got a nice laugh to and so many can relate to it the net is addictive thats for sure and i know so many have been there where they say the are not going to get one and then they are on forever lol great flow love the rhythm and the detail perfect loved it from start to finish cant wait to read more of your work

zealous123

08/28/2009

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT THIS POEM I WILL PERFORM ON SATURDAY THANX FOR THE REALNESS... LOL

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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