LET IT OUT

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    • zealous123
    • Poetry tells stories n a way that i have never seen before and can open u up emotionally and speaks volumes, unheard volumes

    LET IT OUT

    AS I TURN AND LOOK, YOUR ON MY SIDE THOUGH DAYS WHEN I JUS
    CRY AND BREAK DOWN, AS IT SEEMS WILL IT CHANGE, DO I REALLY 
    BELIEVE THAT GOD WILL I KNOW HE'S REAL, SOMETIMES I JUS FEEL ALONE EVEN WHEN I HEAR A DIAL TONE ON MY TELEPHONE WANTING
    TO CALL AND SPILL WHAT'S INSIDE THAT SCREAMS LIKE A NEWBORN
    BABE WAITING TO BE HELD CLOSE IS IT JUS MY EMOTIONS OR MY
    LACK OF DEVOTION, MY TIME WHERE DO I GO FROM HERE, ITS GOT TO BE HIGHER WHO TURNED UP THE FIRE IT'S HOT UP IN HERE, I WILL BE AS GOLD YOU WAIT AND CEE THE BEST IS YET TO COME, I KNOW SOME 
    HAVE COUNTED ME OUT HE'S DOWN AGAIN AS THEY DON'T KNOW IT'S ALL APART OF GODS PLAN...............           

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    Vonn commented on LET IT OUT

    09-08-2009

    i'm in love with your writing. even tho your sentence structure could use a lil help i love the way your words and rhymes flow. the way somethin is written can give it a whole new meanin and i love wat this poem is sayin. great write and i look forward to many more

    zealous123

    09/09/2009

    thank u for the feedbak really do, need to work on sentence structure, still learning that, thats what im lackn i no, workn on that, but thanx for honesty

    biteme commented on LET IT OUT

    08-18-2009

    this is great and i love it, very insperational, and it shows that u r strong, keep up the good work!!!!

    TheInspiration commented on LET IT OUT

    08-12-2009

    I LOVE IT!!! it's beautiful in it's own way, but real... it's nice 2 c a man write dat it's ok 2 cry... i teach my 3 princes dat's it's ok... dat it doesn't make them any less of a man... they're still human nonetheless... it's ok 2 CRY... God is good all da time... & yes it is his plan...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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