My Light

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    My Light

    Do you see the stars
    When you go to bed
    Do you see the Angels
    Dancing in your head
    Do you see the loved ones
    Who went away
    If I had one wish
    I'd wish they could stay
    When you think about the past
    Does it bring a smile to your face
    If you really think about it
    They're in a better place
    There's no more hurt
    No more pain
    Now I know why the heavens sing
    You don't want us to cry
    You want us to be strong
    Your memory will always live on
    In our hearts, and in our minds
    Like a star you will shine
    As you look down, and guide me
    To live my life right
    i want to say thank you
    For being....
    My Light

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    poetryrules commented on My Light

    11-24-2009

    Not bad. Many people will respond to the topic. What happened, however, to the rhyme scheme? It was abcb for 12 lines--then poof, out it went not to be resurrected until the last four. Sorry if I'm being picky.

    Starchild commented on My Light

    03-22-2009

    This one is right on time. Because over the last year I have a lot of stars shining bright in the sky and like you say they are in a better place. Keep up the good work and continue to write you have a gift.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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