mommy stayed and daddy left

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    • adamstc
    • is clearly broken hearted. I miss my Joker

    mommy stayed and daddy left

    my mother chose to stay
    and daddy chose to leave
    and right before he left
    i begged him "daddy take me please"
    he promised to come back
    in time to help me pack
    and here i am seventeen years later
    still waiting for him to come back
    he has two other sons
    and a wife who looks like a nun
    and now they are his pride and joy
    and what we had is done
    so here is my reply
    daddy why'd you have to lie
    and leave my mother cryin'
    when she loved you enough to die
    so no worries about me
    'cause mama carried me
    and now that i am older now
    i promise not to leave
    my kids will know true love
    and they won't see how you're a bum
    because their dad will love and love
    as Christ did for my mum

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    LEAKINGPEN commented on mommy stayed and daddy left

    09-01-2009

    My grandmother always tell me that circumstances shape character. Yours shaped you into the best mother for your kids...love your poem!!!!!!!!!

    Nadia1986 commented on mommy stayed and daddy left

    07-07-2009

    Nice I'm glad you got your anger out about your dad. Thank god were able to write about how we feel!

    Drivingczar commented on mommy stayed and daddy left

    03-17-2009

    Songbird singing!

    SAWBER commented on mommy stayed and daddy left

    12-04-2008

    Very good

    Phoenix9 commented on mommy stayed and daddy left

    11-28-2008

    again very well done

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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