one kid

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    • adamstc
    • is clearly broken hearted. I miss my Joker

    one kid
    one kid,two kids,three kids,four
    most mothers would scream no more!
    but i'm not blessed to bare a child
    so i'll just pray to God some more
    it doesn't matter what's the style
    just send me one to make me smile
    and even if i die that day
    a piece of me on earth will stay
    so please God send a child my way
    and happy forever will i stay

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    LEAKINGPEN commented on one kid

    09-01-2009

    I don't know if you writing from personal experience but your poems are very heart- catching. I love to read poems like this. In the bible it says that a simple life is full, and a full life is empty. This poem is simple but yet so full!!!!!!!
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    Phoenix9 commented on one kid

    11-28-2008

    short and to the point,not bad
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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