Mary had a lamb

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this cam from Mary had a little lamb
poetry but i wrote it in my way to have a diffrent meaning such as the meaning as needed God and walking away such as in one person charicter.
the mary little lamb talks about a school of kids and
about how the lamb is not a loud in schools any more now the
world is a mess and i agree with it,
any ways this is a good poem
i like it

Mary had a lamb

Mary had a little lamb,

His home was white as snow.

And every time Mary cried,

The lamb was sure to show

See there’s that speak in Mary’s eyes

And there was a lamb,

Who made her smile.

 He made her laugh and play,

And sing hey all day

Then one day Mary said good-bye

For she had a change in mind

Oh what must we do?

 To change Mary’s mind.

Because with out this lamb

Mary cries,

It gets worse and worse each day,

Because she thinks the lamb is so not cool.

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XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on Mary had a lamb

07-06-2009

this is really good. i like the nursery rhyme lol cute. keep going.

IEnvyYou

07/06/2009

thank u i like it too

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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