love stinks

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    love stinks
    This feeling this powerful feeling. It consumes me so much.It is too weired.They say its love.You have never felt it until now. When he speaks you get blushed.He nears you and you get dizzy.You feel a lump in your throght
    he gets closer and closer. He speaks and you listen. You feel its like a dream.
    He waits for an answer you feel so stupid for making him wait.You finally tell him the truth he doesn't feel the same.He breaks your heart.You dare not speak of it.He doesn't speak to you anymore.You say to yourself that you should have never said that.Love stinks and it will always will.

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    ShadowRider01 commented on love stinks

    06-09-2009

    Some of thats true, but maybe the reason you cant end up with that person is because you to aren't ment to be together. maybe your suppose to be with someone special, so dnt give up:) this is just my advise if you are having trouble.
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