Loss

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    Loss

    Loss
    In the dark of night
    I hold loss in my heart.

    I hear the angels call
    and the tears start.

    In the dark of night I beg to hold
    and only get the empty cold.

    Loss surrounds and I drown.
    Loss breaths and I die.
    I count the minutes
    to eternity and fear never knowing.

    I age in time without a sign showing.
    Loss wraps me and I am consumed.

    No escape, only bitter doom.

    I fear its silences and seek its voice.
    I live without any choice.

    Loss creeps in silently
    and steals my breath away.

    Connie Lynn Lawson

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Loss

    09-08-2010

    The tone of the poem if full with wanted to be filled, but empty with loss. It is very sad and lonely. I think your words flowed very well, and it was very vivid poem.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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