Looking over...

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  • Life

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    Understanding whats happening in my life

    Looking over...



    Its funny
    looking over the water
    and I see...
    how my life is changing around me
    I see...
    how am I different than I was before
    I see...
    How special and how powerful I really am
    I see...
    The power in peace and in silence
    The power of observation
    The power of a stare
    I see...
    How the life of those involved in my life and those coming into my life
    is changing
    I see...
    the waves crashing into the beach sand
    and the waves that leave the beach area and travel back into the sea
    I see...
    the tides turning in my life
    my understanding is different
    my spirit is different
    But I am just
    Looking over the water

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    tierra7 commented on Looking over...

    05-17-2010

    wonderful word play,,,truly an Excellent read...the tranquility that you created was very enjoyable...thank you for the share...e-mail when you have more ...come check out the new mary's bridge....Namaste...Tierra @}-'-,-
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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