Journey of life

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A poem that defines the journey of spiritual life, meaning noone understands the path of our lives but in the end we have to face alone, even in the midst of a companion or people.

Journey of life



What will I...
lose now
I notice that on this spiritual journey
that I am on...
The further I walk
the more things
 I leave behind
As I walk on this road...
leaving behind
all of the things that reminded me
of the past...
that was my life
What will I...
face on this new road?
A new level of spirituality
More people to encounter
 or
will I walk alone?
I am afraid but I have to continue walking
What will I...
leave behind?
I am leaving behind my humanity
to embrace something that has never been embraced before
and something that has never happened before in the history of mankind
What will I...
Do?
As nobody understands this path but me
Which makes me feel and believe
I am alone
Even in the midst of people
I look but I am distant
I embrace others but I am so far away
All of the things
that used to make sense
makes no sense
and as I am continue to walk away and alone
On this
Journey of life

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tierra7 commented on Journey of life

05-17-2010

Very Powerful!! very true of lifes journey..GR8 Job !! Blessings! Tierra @}-'-,-

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

soullite’s Poems (19)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Embrace 0
Close my eyes 2
As I turn away...My high place 1
Join me... 1
Sealed with a kiss 1
Walking away 0
Before you dream... 2
A Rose... 2
No longer 1
When the walk ends... 1
I need you 2
I Apologize 2
Before I lead 1
Looking over... 2
Hold me... 2
Special... 2
Journey of life 1
Missing you... 2
Not like you... 2