Close my eyes

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    Close my eyes


    As I
    Close my eyes
    I would
     like to see
    the world for what it
    really is
    I would like to see
    the world
     from God's point of view
    to see
    the spirit of a person
    the soul
    of every man, woman
    boy and girl
    to watch
    how
    every step of our life
    is already made
    and be able to see
    how
    everything evolves
    around God
    even if we fail to acknowledge
    Him
    the paths, trails
    and the journey
    are all
    a part of
    His Way for us
    I like to think
    of how
    beautiful
    it would be
    to see
    if I could
    when i
    Close my eyes

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    soulwriter commented on Close my eyes

    12-19-2010

    I like the way the thought flows down the page in one continuous structure that builds with every breath - one sentence to form a strong soulful expression. Well Done.. Live StronG Soul

    tierra7 commented on Close my eyes

    12-19-2010

    hi sweetie, this is a wonderful piece...if only ....we could see ....what the higher up sees...I definitely like how you wrote this , I felt your explorin' wonders...Excellent Jobs!! Tierra@}-'-,

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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