Join me

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  • Death
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  • Loss
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  • Lost Love

    Join me

     Baby, Join me in heaven.
    I will be waiting for your heart to beat it's last beat.
    I will be waiting for the color and warmpth to leave your body.
    I will be waiting for the last scream to leave your mouth.
    I will be waiting for you to breathe your last breath.
    I will be waiting for you.

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    smoothdame commented on Join me

    12-01-2010

    I like this poem. I like the sense of longing to be reunited with a love that was lost good job.
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    Maxsbabyforever

    12/01/2010

    Thanks, I wanted to tell what i feel like when i want the one who got taken too soon.....

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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