Join me

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Join me

Baby, Join me in heaven.
I will be waiting for your heart to beat it's last beat.
I will be waiting for the color and warmpth to leave your body.
I will be waiting for the last scream to leave your mouth.
I will be waiting for you to breathe your last breath.
I will be waiting for you.

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smoothdame commented on Join me

12-01-2010

I like this poem. I like the sense of longing to be reunited with a love that was lost good job.

Maxsbabyforever

12/01/2010

Thanks, I wanted to tell what i feel like when i want the one who got taken too soon.....

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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