Forever is all I wanted.....

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    Forever is all I wanted.....

    You are my air
    The sun in my day
    The moon in my night
    The spring in my step
    You are my everything.

    You are the stars in the sky
    The birds in the trees
    The shimmer, the sparkle, the shine.

    Without the light you put into my life
    I would be nothing
    A single leaf on the ground in autumn,
    Lost, forgotten, alone.

    Before i knew you,
    I was nothing.
    Now I am everything,
    With you at my side,
    I am invincible!

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    smoothdame commented on Forever is all I wanted.....

    12-01-2010

    "The shimmer, the sparkle, the shine" my favorite part of the poem such honestly yes love is an amazing journey.

    Maxsbabyforever

    12/01/2010

    Thanks. I hope i can keep writing.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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