I am suffocating.......

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    I am suffocating.......

     I'm suffocating......But no one can see me there....No one to give me air.....But then I see you....And suddenly I can breathe.....But then you turn and walk away.....I choke on the breath you gave to me.....I'm still suffocating....

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    smoothdame commented on I am suffocating.......

    12-01-2010

    "Im suffocating but no one can see me there" great start such passion I like the flow of this poem great job.
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    Maxsbabyforever

    12/01/2010

    Thank you.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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