jealousy

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    jealousy

    Come to see them
    In their reflection
    Save the jealousy
    They are made together

    Sun set on the beach
    Moonlight rise from western Savannah casting
    Two shadow on the wall
    Which merge as one

    The queen of the night
    Has freshing the air
    You can only see them
    And breath the air at night

    Save your opinion
    The sea waves has
    Taken their love
    To atmosphere of happiness

    They are to be one
    Your dark eye
    Can't quench the red sea
    They must join one

    The sound of the piano
    Must weaves it's
    indiscriminate harmony
    For the love to sustain forever

    Soul Passion

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    universescribe1 commented on jealousy

    12-08-2008

    The way you've constructed this gives me pause. It is an a typical presentation of jealousy. Vivid yet subtle. Kudos!

    SET commented on jealousy

    12-06-2008

    Great poem

    leslie commented on jealousy

    11-22-2008

    Soul or Pearl, I think DMiller comment is true.

    DMiller commented on jealousy

    11-20-2008

    Your poetry skills are very unique and i love your talent...... u kan always count on great critics to put a review on ur work

    Reality4ever commented on jealousy

    11-20-2008

    Question, what lead to you guys separating?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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