ive been thinkin

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    ive been thinkin

     lately,
    ive been thinkin'
    'bout everything that has been.
    i mustve missed something
    somewhere.
    when did it all end?
    i see people are changing.
    theres no happiness any more.
    they all go their own way,
    i'm afraid its leading to war.
    and if you ask me where i've been
    im goona tell you the same.ive been lost inside of my brain
    and theres no one else but me to blame.
    lately
    i ve been thinkin'
    'bout my lonely life.
    even today
    i have to say
    ive kept everyone at -bay.         steve

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    MarionYost commented on ive been thinkin

    06-21-2010

    Sometimes you have to( Keep everyone at bay) To protect yourself. I have the same problem .... Damn trust issuses! LOL. I know exactly what you're talkin' about . Great write as always. All the best -Marion-
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    inkmaster commented on ive been thinkin

    12-16-2009

    nice flow I enjoyed it thanks for sharing........................Inkmaster
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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