I'm on the edge

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  • Lonliness

    I'm on the edge

     I'm on the edge
    I'm looking in
    my lonely heart
    it screams for him
    to catch me.
    I'm falling down
    my tears they fall.
    I hear the echo
    against the wall.
    my heart it breaks
    each step he takes
    away from me. now I see
    that no one loves me
    I'm all alone
    standing here.
    I'm  on the edge.
    I'm falling fast.
    hanging by a single thread
    don't know how long it'll last
    before someone cares
    to hold on to me
    before I let go
    to the world around me
    that had no love for me at all.

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    hilarylane commented on I'm on the edge

    08-10-2009

    I hope things are looking up for you. I can feel your pain through your words...Good poem
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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