if i lose you

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    if i lose you
    i know you bare a pain
    worse than any
    i know you carry a burden
    greater than all
    i know you carry
    with the chance to heal
    if i lose you
    i will carry a pain
    greatest of all
    if i lose you
    my pain will be greater than yours
    if i lose you
    there will be no hope th heal
    cuz if i lose you
    my fragile heart will shatter
    that is why i am willing
    to bear your pain
    so we can make it through
    cuz if i lose you
    i will be no more

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    LadyL714 commented on if i lose you

    09-14-2009

    This is a very nice poem but the character in the poem must realize all is not over if love is lost.
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    HopeOhlarik commented on if i lose you

    05-19-2009

    awesome poem!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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