I Remember You

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    This is about my husband who has died with cancer we were saying our goodbyes at the time

    I Remember You

    I remember as you put on a brave face
    We laughed a little here in this place

    We said our goodbyes didn't want you to die 
    But it was out of our hands your just a man

    God knows best he gave you your rest
    We still feel the pain when we think of you again

    A longing deep inside that our faces cant hide
    Going on every day in the usual way 

    Now an empty space we move on with God's grace
    We still shed a tear when we think of you here

    And all you went through there was nothing we could do

    Every day we were slowly  losing you


    You family gathered and made a big fuss
    They couldn't do enough for us


    Thank God for them all they answered the call
    They stayed with you until your fall

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    lovablecindy commented on I Remember You

    01-20-2011

    love this poem... it almost made me tear up. it also made me think about my great grand mother (R.I.P.)
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    honeypot

    01/20/2011

    Thanks for your kind comment and I am sorry for your pain about your grand mother god bless

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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