I miss you baby!

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  • smartrissa
  • what happend to people you can trust? the closest thing i get to a best friend is the pack of ciggarettes in my purse.... messed up!

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Today my boyfriend went to court. It is a high poosibility that they will put him in jail for six months. At 9:09 AM on March 2nd, 2010 He went into court. Six months is the least sentance. I pray to god that he doesnt get that. I need him. and his child needs him!

I miss you baby!

I will miss you.
Today is the day your sentence is.
If you go to jail. I will have to live without you for six months.
I dont know if i can live without you for that long.
I already miss you dearly.
My head is spinning.
My heart is racing.
My life feels as though its ending.
I want you.
I want you to hold me at night.
God i miss you so much.
You have no idea how much!
I love you
With everything in me
I will come see you every second i can.
If i could i wouldnt leave you.
Six months...
Its so long.
I love you.
God i pray
Dont let him go.
I need him.
I need him!
Please give the jurry compassion and have them choose to not put him in jail.
God, please!
I am crying out to you.
Please!

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KShanay commented on I miss you baby!

03-03-2010

I wrote a poem like a year ago called "Hey Baby, I Miss You"... Funny thing is I wrote it in the middle of the night... As soon as I woke up... You write exactly what comes to your head... And I think that is a good thing... You said "I need him, I need him!" Because that's what you felt in your heart... I admire your writing...

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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