i feel so naked

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    i feel so naked
    I feel so naked
    I feel scared
    I am in a cage
    I can’t go anywhere
    My soul wants release soon
    Or else it will burst
    It’s like a curse
    I can’t break free
    I just want to be me
    But people say that I am a freak
    So they hid me away from society
    Still bare
    Still naked
    But with no friends in my wake

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    lonewolf commented on i feel so naked

    04-24-2009

    everyone needs to feel loved and accepted. nice little write
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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