Hypocrites And Haters!!!

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    Hypocrites And Haters!!!

    You talk the good talk
    You tell what you know,
    You think that you have all of the answers
    You put on a real good show.
    You say not to do something
    But you do it the same,
    When somebody else does it
    You call them out of their name.
    You are lacking in areas but yet
    You put down someone else,
    You need to stop focusing on what I'm doing
    Pay attention to yourself.
    You need to realize who you are
    You will find out sooner than later,
    You criticize and you judge
    You are a hypocrite and a hater.
    Why? Who are you?
    Don't walk around like your shit don't stink,
    Before you open your mouth
    You need to stop and think.
    Don't hate me because I'm beautiful
    Don't hate me because I'm smart,
    Don't hate me because I'm always smiling
    Don't hate me because of the kindness of my heart.
    Don't be mad at me because you are mean and
    People don't respond well to you,
    Think about some of the things that you say and
    Some of the things that you do.
    There are too many things going on
    To be focusing on what I'm doing,
    A personality or sense of humor
    Should be what you are pursuing.

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    Kdaddy commented on Hypocrites And Haters!!!

    09-08-2009

    Good poem, there will always be hypocrites and haters! My I suggest you try counting your words and syllables to maximize your flow. You are a strong writer, but we all strive to be stronger. Overall good read.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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