A Place To Rest

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    • YungPoetiic
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    A Place To Rest

    God looked down on your body
    So tired from hangin on
    From a life that was overwhelming you
    He wanted back His daughter
    So He took away the air you breathee
    And gave you what was best
    A place to be at peace
    A final place to rest

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    MOMofTWINS commented on A Place To Rest

    10-02-2009

    No games, no beating around the bush, very to the point and heart felt. Im so sorry for your loss; But Id bet whom ever you lost is smiling from ear to ear about this poem. Well done.

    YungPoetiic

    10/15/2009

    thanks for the comment and I hope that she is let her soul rest in peace

    dixiemom commented on A Place To Rest

    03-24-2009

    its short but to the point and everything u needed to say was said

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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