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    You

    I want to get to know the real you
    Th naked deep uncensored spirit of you
    Because ive become entwinedin your smile and
    Captured in the very essence of your soul
    Your chocolate flesh is sweeter than mollasses or
    Honey from the bee you've stung me with your eyes and
    Healed my body with your lips
    I'm so turned on by simply your intelligence
    I can't even come to grips with my thoughts
    You run through my veins my heart beats to your rhythm
    My nerves receivemessages from your brain, I live you
    When I sleep at night, I dream you
    Even your imperfections are perfect
    You intruded into my life and made it whole
    Similar to a thief in the night
    You have stolen my soul,
    But I cant let you know
    Because you've been bludgeoned by love and stained with pain
    Your heart was played with like a video game
    My love can heal your hurt and turn your blood back to red
    But I refuse to befg because my feelings are on the table
    You can clearly see my hand I have no tricks up my sleeve
    I want us to become one please
    Take my heart and run, For I will follow
    I will watch and protect your preciousness
    Give me your key, let me release your grief
    And replace it with something deep and enduring
    I'm here, but I can't wait for your heart
    To see what your mind refuses too
    I love us, but I love me too
    My turns over
    The next move is on You

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    unmaker commented on You

    03-24-2009

    well written, you have talent and you express yourself eloquently

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    YungPoetiic’s Poems (25)

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    Lovers Nightmare 1
    Before I Went To Bed 1
    What A Mother's Worth 1
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    My Treasure 1
    Hypocrites And Haters!!! 1
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    Natural Disaster 1
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    My Family 1
    Courage To Move On 0
    Beyond Climax 2
    Shattered Peices 0
    We'll Be Friends Foreva 1
    Like No Otha 0
    The Reasons I Love You 1