Hopeless

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  • ravensaflight
  • is so thankful for the positive feedback and now have the confidence I may have been lacking before, so expect more posts! Thanks fellow poets!

Hopeless

I sit in complete darkness, consumed by hate and fear
While being tortured by the memories i've aquired throughout the years.
With each passing second this place seems more and more like hell
And I've been here for so long I can't recall just when i fell
Into this pit of depression, someone should have noticed my abscence by now
But all alone I realize I have got to escape, somehow.
Fearfull and paniced I feel as if the walls are closing in on me
So with all my might I desperately scream, " Someone set me free!"
Realizing that noones coming I suddenly feel so weak
And I've finally given up the fight, I'm hopeless, so to speak.
Maybe God will reach down to me and lift me up high,
Because given a choice between this and death, I would much rather die!

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wizthom commented on Hopeless

08-12-2009

beautiful emotional release,,your creativity flows as u wish it to go ,touches all that reads including me,,

frog commented on Hopeless

07-18-2009

The line 'someone should have noticed my absense by now' really grabbed me. I sense a lot of abandonment and pain in this poem that is spoken well. Lovely write.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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