HONEY

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    Ok not what you thought-- : )

    HONEY

     HONEY

    I'm caught up in your euphoria
    Licking
    Dripping
    Kissing
    Missing
    Honey
    Familiar surroundings
    Take me to that place
    My eyes rolling
    Uncontrolling
    Honey
    The taste
    The smell
    Ican't hold on
    No longer
    I'm letting go
    Sweet
    Mmm...
    Ahh--
    Good to the last drop
    Honey
    Do that thing you do
    Make me smile
    But
    My excitement is comong down
    Because-
    I ran out of toast
    For my honey-LOL

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    miwall513 commented on HONEY

    08-19-2009

    wow that was indeed sweet and erotic i'm michael and I love erotic poems if you want to read some of mine look under miwall513
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    ginga commented on HONEY

    08-08-2009

    apple, You also make me smile after reading this. What a clever way for the poet to personify the main character! ginga
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    dahlusion commented on HONEY

    06-12-2009

    I love the way you use eroticism to pour honey on your toast, to get the reader to finish even though the toast is gone.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Applepie’s Poems (7)

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    HONEY 3 06/12/2009
    BLACK FLAG 2 06/09/2009
    NINETEEN 3 06/06/2009
    FRIENDSHIP LOST 2 06/06/2009
    SYMPHONY 3 06/06/2009
    BEUTIFUL EYE 2 05/26/2009
    WORDS 0 05/26/2009
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