Homeless

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Homeless

Being homeless is not the absence of shelter that gives you some protection.

In my view it’s the absence of sanctity and comfort in the simplest situation.

Being homeless is not the inability to sticking a key in a door where you pay rent.

Through my eyes it’s being awake and responsive but to reality you’re incoherent.

Being homeless is not the inability to call a place your own.

It’s the inability of showing gratitude and appreciation through the action you have shown

In my opinion a home is not just a physical place that has four walls

But a state of mind that comes from a well balanced up bringing that will keep you from drowning in life’s waterfalls.

Being homeless is not the absence of family that gives you encouraging strength.

It’s being in the presence of family but yet you feel you’re becoming extinct.

Being homeless here has nothing to do with man-made possessions you must understand

But the absence of the mind only God can give you if you please him even in a foreign land.

 

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jesusfreake commented on Homeless

08-18-2009

Wow!! This poem gets a high 10 and if I could I would give it an 100....I mighty poem u have written with a smooth flow, and a depth to no end...I think that this may be the greatest "Frustrations of Life" poem I have ever read and I especially like the end. The things God can give us has no end, but holds much truth..u are very wise, sir and ur poems spill out a lot of ur wisdom as well as your talent u posses.....awesome job!!

BraveMoon commented on Homeless

08-18-2009

. Doeu, Wah'do Sir.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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