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yet another written gift from my goddess.

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I raise my head to the Eastern sky.

I clasp my hands, and close my eyes. 

I whisper my prayers to the wind and the breeze, 

Sweet smelling air, as it billows thorugh the trees.

I call thee Air, come to me. 

A sudden gust of power and might, 

I embrace the breeze and turn to my right. 

To the South, I see your burning light. 

You bring me warmth, you bring me truth.

Passion, courage, strength, and rebirth. 

Reassuring flames, they lick at my feet, 

I call to you fire, please come to me. 

Again I turn and come to stand, facing West this time, I close my hands. 

Upon far away shores, there comes crashing waves,

Babbling brooks, and soothing rains.

Cleanse me, caress me, giv me life.

I call forth water, on this calm night. 

Once more I turn, and face to the North.

The grass, the trees, the rocks, and the dirt.

The air is filled, sweet smells of spring.

A summer meadow, 

A winteres cling. 

A cling to life, lasts through and through,

Lastly Earth, I call to you.

I shut my eyes, upraise my hands, 

Spirit come complete my friends.

It's with all five that im set free,

My elementsm they have called to me. 

Piece by piece i disappear,

Dissolving to my friends so dear.

Air and Fire, 

Water and Earth.

Spirit leads me to my rebirth.

I hear thy Nyx, she speaks to me. 

Soon my Goddess, home, I shall be. 

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kpeery09 commented on Home

03-07-2010

Very Nice, I love it, keep up the good work. The wonderful flow made it very interesting. I give you 10

lonewolf commented on Home

03-03-2010

this is fantasic!!! kinda like an indian prayer of sorts. its a fave, and definate 10+

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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